Titirangi Storyteller

Telling tales from around the world

The Morning of the Following Day

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The girl in front of me
just sniffed her armpit.
She was out dancing last night
and drinking
and met some guy
went back to his place
and took off her clothes
and did the nasty
but they were too drunk
for it to be any good
and the second time
he couldn’t get it up.
This morning she wanted
to puke when she saw
how he held his toothbrush.
She’ll be home soon
and she can stand in the shower
until the water runs cold,
until the stink of it all
is washed away.

Yeah, I was sitting on the bus. And she did. And the story just came as they sometimes do, from out there somewhere. Good thing I had my notepad in my bag…

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Written by Titirangi Storyteller

27/09/2012 at 12:27 am

One Response

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  1. Ooh. Love the detail about the toothbrush. What an imagination you have.

    Like

    poietes

    09/10/2012 at 3:17 am


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